Focus Group Feedback

For our treatment we did a group presentation which is below:

 http://www.slideshare.net/daviia/treatment-presentation-14468376

Treatment presentation from Davia Oughton

The feedback we got was that:

• We needed permission to film at Alexandra Palace which is one of our locations.
• We also need permission from a parent  because our narrative story has a child in there
• We had a  good song choice and that they understood the use of the Trey Songz ideas

This is the updated treatments where I added in the ethical issues:

http://www.slideshare.net/daviia/treatment-presentation2

Treatment presentation2 from Davia Oughton