Finished Editing

We finished editing our music video and today we also got feedback from another class where they told us what they liked or disliked etc.
They also gave us feedback such as:

• We need to develop the narrative story of 'the other girl' that he is cheating with.
• They liked how we used different locations instead of limiting it to two or less places.
• They liked the use of  the moving pictures in the studio to show the argument.

I did agree with the feedback because the  narrative story was added near the end and we trien to fix it in the best way we could but it didnt turn out the way we wanted.
After the feedback we added the scene at the start of 'the other girl' on the phone talking to her friend saying that he is going to break up with his girlfriend to be with her. And now the whole narrative story makes sense.


Overal when editing it went really well but WE CHANGED the original storyboard ideas because we got more inspiration from recent videos that came out such as:

Keyshia Cole -Trust and Believe

• We used the idea of having the guy cheating on her with her best friend.
• We also did the scene where she sat behind the door and he was knocking on it trying to talk to her but we ended up not using it.

We took out:

• the first meeting at Trafalgar Square and made it happen in Alexandra Palace
• the picnic in the park
• the guy waiting at the dining room table waiting on the girl to come home to him
• having a child in the video
• the end part where he walks away from her because the Picadilly Circus scene runs over to the end